IgnusIudicium's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Back to the Futures]

Okay..

I like this, but I think you could easily improve it. The animation for the best part is okay. It's not brilliant, but I think it works. Maybe if you tried to make it look a bit better.
The other major thing is the voices. You really need to get someone to do the voices for you. Ask around here, there's loads of people willing to try and get their talent out.
If you did this, I think you could have yourself a lovely little parody.

MartinSMcFly responds:

For once thing, I DID NOT GET VOICE ACTING BECAUSE COMPUTER VOICES ARE MORE HUMOROUS.

[My First Animation! :P]

Aww..

That's nice. I'd like to see more work, and improved animation in the future. The shaky animation style works well but I think you've overdone it a little here.
Sound and colour would also be nice.

But for a first piece, well done.

AutomaticToaster responds:

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[Exploding Head Syndrome]

What did you just do to my head?

Why did you tell me all of these things? Am I supposed to care?

Your animation is good, but that rant kind of defeats the object of me even saying that.

vk3fgcp responds:

I copy-pasted it from Uncyclopedia.

[Super Hombre!]

Nice.

I'm giving you 4/5 because I really want you to clean this up a bit and make it brilliant. I like the humour, the Spanish, and the end is brilliant.
But yeah, the animation needs serious cleaning up, it doesn't look that good. The "awesome intro" isn't that good, either.. maybe you should just leave it out.
So, if you could improve the animation, appearance, and the audio quality, then I think this would be a decent submission.

Horsenwelles responds:

the appearance is what i put more effort into than audio, but i agree that it could be cleaned up

[Hobo Jingo Eats Out]

Pretty good, actually!

Obviously, it needs a bit of work, but the humour is actually funny (which is rare), the sound effects are okay (could be a bit better), and the animation is lovely. I like the sketchy style. I hope you carry on with these idea. If you smoothed up the animation a little, I think this could turn out well.

Thelostcup responds:

Thanks, bro.

I'm probably going to upload the full short once I'm finished.

[Raptor Burgers]

Very awesome.

Well animated, good music, good story. Congratulations. I hope you reach front page with this. :)

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:)!

[Hunting Bears]

Sad and cute.

I like what you're trying to do here. There's absolutely nothing wrong with the storyline, whether other people will think it is boring or not. The only things I'd like you to try and improve would be the audio quality (Fantastic song choice, by the way.) and the overall appearance of the images. I like the.. 'stillness', don't get me wrong, but I think it would be gorgeous if the images were more clean, and the background was a little more exciting.

BrainTrauma responds:

Thank you for your advice, this is my fist flash and I was hoping people would give me a few pointers =]

[G-Man LG Banner]

Could be better.

Your animation is well done, although a little bit rough. The text isn't particularly attractive, unfortunately, and the colour scheme makes it seem a bit dull. Overall it's good, but I think you could probably make something better with effort.

gskrocks responds:

Thank u, I will certainly follow ur tips!