EgoRaptor!
Haha. Brilliant. I love it. And obviously just hearing EgoRaptor's voice makes me want to go watch every single one of his videos.
EgoRaptor!
Haha. Brilliant. I love it. And obviously just hearing EgoRaptor's voice makes me want to go watch every single one of his videos.
Okay..
I like this, but I think you could easily improve it. The animation for the best part is okay. It's not brilliant, but I think it works. Maybe if you tried to make it look a bit better.
The other major thing is the voices. You really need to get someone to do the voices for you. Ask around here, there's loads of people willing to try and get their talent out.
If you did this, I think you could have yourself a lovely little parody.
For once thing, I DID NOT GET VOICE ACTING BECAUSE COMPUTER VOICES ARE MORE HUMOROUS.
Awww..
That was nice. The animation was lovely.
Ended a bit suddenly, though. The music just cuts offs. If you could change that it'd be fantastic. :)
Great animation...
But like has been said, it lacked originality, and the dialogue was terrible. Sorry. :(
Perhaps you should stick to the animation and let someone else write the plot?
Wow.
Your animation is incredible! I love it! No faults, though I don't completely understand what this is for, but I'm going to look through your other stuff and try and find out.
Thank you for pleasing my eyes and ears with this beautiful piece!
Well done.
You are not an idiot. I'm proud of you.
Aww..
That's nice. I'd like to see more work, and improved animation in the future. The shaky animation style works well but I think you've overdone it a little here.
Sound and colour would also be nice.
But for a first piece, well done.
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What did you just do to my head?
Why did you tell me all of these things? Am I supposed to care?
Your animation is good, but that rant kind of defeats the object of me even saying that.
I copy-pasted it from Uncyclopedia.
One day I hope to actually use all the skills I've worked on to make some submissions, in the meanwhile, I'll just sit here and yell that other people's are bad.
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