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Nice.

I'm giving you 4/5 because I really want you to clean this up a bit and make it brilliant. I like the humour, the Spanish, and the end is brilliant.
But yeah, the animation needs serious cleaning up, it doesn't look that good. The "awesome intro" isn't that good, either.. maybe you should just leave it out.
So, if you could improve the animation, appearance, and the audio quality, then I think this would be a decent submission.

Horsenwelles responds:

the appearance is what i put more effort into than audio, but i agree that it could be cleaned up

Pretty good, actually!

Obviously, it needs a bit of work, but the humour is actually funny (which is rare), the sound effects are okay (could be a bit better), and the animation is lovely. I like the sketchy style. I hope you carry on with these idea. If you smoothed up the animation a little, I think this could turn out well.

Thelostcup responds:

Thanks, bro.

I'm probably going to upload the full short once I'm finished.

Er..

Well, it didn't really make a lot of sense. That was my main problem with it. The animation was acceptable for the most part, maybe a bit simple. The voices were clear enough, either.

Overall a good first submission, but it needs work.

Very awesome.

Well animated, good music, good story. Congratulations. I hope you reach front page with this. :)

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

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WOW!

Trippy! The loop isn't perfect, but your animation style is fantastic, and if I was epileptic I'd be dead! Amazing!
I'm looking forward to more work from you!

Well, it's definitely HD.

Yeah, I liked the original. I guess it's.. the same. :P

Carbonwater responds:

Pretty much.

Just adds on to the original joke even further.

Sad and cute.

I like what you're trying to do here. There's absolutely nothing wrong with the storyline, whether other people will think it is boring or not. The only things I'd like you to try and improve would be the audio quality (Fantastic song choice, by the way.) and the overall appearance of the images. I like the.. 'stillness', don't get me wrong, but I think it would be gorgeous if the images were more clean, and the background was a little more exciting.

BrainTrauma responds:

Thank you for your advice, this is my fist flash and I was hoping people would give me a few pointers =]

Well...

There's definite improvement in your work, but this video is kind of pointless. The audio quality could be greatly improved, and perhaps it's just my opinion, but I'd rather you'd just made new work and submitted it seperately instead of showing off your old work which people may or may not care about.
That does sound slightly harsh, but I just think your creativity could be exercised in a more interesting way.

Could be better.

Your animation is well done, although a little bit rough. The text isn't particularly attractive, unfortunately, and the colour scheme makes it seem a bit dull. Overall it's good, but I think you could probably make something better with effort.

gskrocks responds:

Thank u, I will certainly follow ur tips!

Well..

I rated this fairly low, mainly because I disagree with so called "tributes" and would rather people just made their own ideas up, but also because even as a tribute to Microbotnik, you're lacking. The absence of sound is one obvious downside. The colours and the lines are a bit dodgy, but on the upside, your animation -is- very smooth, and I the scanner looks really good.
I'd like to see you put your talent towards your own ideas and practice.

One day I hope to actually use all the skills I've worked on to make some submissions, in the meanwhile, I'll just sit here and yell that other people's are bad.

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