Work on it.
Well.. yes. Well done on your first animation.
There are various strengths and weaknesses here. There are obvious things you clean up, like the animation, and the text, but your voice is fantastic for animations and the audio is well recorded. Your humour is also mildly entertaining. I'd like to see you work on this, keep practicing and such. I don't doubt that you have the potential to make much better submissions than this if you keep at it.
Awww!
That was so cute. I love your animation style. The monster was gorgeous.
Wonderful.
Truly delightful. Something I'd show my children if I had any. Keep up the good work! :)
Brilliant, as ever.
Damn you and your talent. Damn it!! Heh.. ohh.. you're brilliant. I love Bitey, and I love you for making it!
Well done!
One day I hope to actually use all the skills I've worked on to make some submissions, in the meanwhile, I'll just sit here and yell that other people's are bad.
Age 33, Female
Unemployed
Essex, England
Joined on 3/20/07
My First Animation Flash 
The Ignored Monster 
War, Snow and Fire 
Waterlollies 